Box Out First Draft

Quite alot of magazines have 'box outs' which can feature mini reviews and mini articles that help to divide the page up, like this one which features 'Everyone's Talking About...', i like this in music magazines and i am going to use this form of structure aswell because the demographics of my target audience means that they don't have enough time to read full articles, so by adding 'mini articles' they can read it at their pleausre, however my target audience will still have time to read a full article, that is why i have added it aswell, but it is not as long (the full article draft can be seen below). The 'mini articles i have written in a draft form, so i will know what photos to take, can be read below, it features reviews on new CD's and singles that have recently come out.

Women Talking Foolishly           9/10

The W.T.F’s new CD, ‘Killing Monsters’, topped the Current Music Magazine charts this month. Their music style is very much like ‘The Ticking Clock’s’ style, an urban, Dub Step feel, but, using classical instruments, like the clarinet.It is a very intersting collaboration that defiess all of the laws of music, we rate it 9/10, however, it is rated 8.5/10 online, although the charts tell the story, have your say at www.current.co.uk, on Twitter and on Facebook.

 

Dancing With Hero’s           9.5/10

Their new single ‘Eating Superman’ has blown us away; it follows several different genres, in one    Jazz, Classical, Rock, Pop and Dub Step. We feel here at current magazine they are following in the footsteps of Queen, their collaborations have an edgy feel, but it really works. We give it 9.5/10 and it really deserves it, for their achievements they have earned the Current Magazine Bronze award, Current Magazines ‘Favourites’cann be seen at www.current.co.uk/favourites.

Not Human           7/10

Even though Not Human Have earned the ‘Chip off the Block’ award we feel their new single     ‘Fishing In The City’ was really bad. It was a new style for them that didn’t work; they said “we wanted to go in a new direction” explains lead member, Jon. However they said that they are starting their new CD soon, you can read the full article on page 18, or go to the websites    www.current.co.uk/articles/nothuman.

You can read all of our reviews at www.current.co.uk/reviews; you can even takepart in the online  survey, which you are automaticaly entered into the prize draw to win tickets to see ‘A Band & A Banjo’ live.